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Our Bitter Goodbyes

Your voice I heard

just the other day.

Those few short words

that you had to say.


I know now

what I have to do.

I just can't let go

and I miss you too.


I have said

my bitter goodbyes.

But you aren't here

to hear my lonely cries.


Your smell

still lingers around.

Your whispers are

not making a sound.


I let you go

and be on your way.

Today you left me

after I asked you to stay.

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I couldn't miss you less if I tried

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  • Haneen277
    September 15, 2008
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    this reminds me of aloooooot,... great write