roses smell like angels.
but angels never wilt.
they are here forever.
immortal and perfect.
but this one did.
it wilted in troubled pain.
because you chose life over love.
now sweet scents turn sour.
A contest entry
- I'm sick and bored...so I started a quickie by Blooming Poet.
950 points, ended September 13, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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Cool,
I really like your analogy
"because you chose life over love
now sweet scents turn sour"
Very well done here sis
Good luck in the contest
Ken
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very creative. love how you made love relate to sweet and sour
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A creative take on the prompt... Well done, bringing a unique feel to this and adding emotions to the picture... best of luck.
Ken
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I believe any that lose out on a relationship goes through these feelings. Perhaps love going wrong is what causes falling angels
Kari
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