Dreaming in flowered expressions ~
that touches pale skin
and warms the inner sides of me
Cradling my delicate frame
with the tenderness
of a summer’s kiss
Keeping me in one place
that I have only known for a moment
but will paint
a deeper shade
of belonging…
Author notes
Prompt 2:
picture
A contest entry
- I'm sick and bored...so I started a quickie by Blooming Poet.
950 points, ended September 13, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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One word beautiful
that's all folks lol
KEVIN X
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Oh I can so see why this won a trophy. You capture love at its very best. Congratulations on your shiny silver trophy. Best to you sis.
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wonderful. this poem just spoke to me and the emotions were amazing
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What a sweetly simple yet exquisitely lovely poem. ♥
I love how you can capture the gentle essence of the picture in few words, but each one of them beautiful and adding deeper meaning. ♥
I adore this poem very much, wonderfully written. ♥
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The feeling of needing to belong really is so important.
BTW it's nice to see you again. I hope that you're doing well
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Ahhh beautiful. Love the gentleness and tenderness of this... wonderful words that bring out the emotions of the picture... Well done and best of luck...
Ken
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Beautiful
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