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through
    the roll of mist,
heart scattered
    upon the moss

she plays,
                    …Ophelia


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prompt inspired, http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Image/60/373.jpg

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  • Meroza
    March 31

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    Very interesting. It dosen't say much tho, I do like short poems to express a bit more. Maybe try and re-write it a little?

    Good luck.