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Make Love To Me

 

 

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Make love to me my darling

like you never have before

make me want to stay here

 

let me feel your manhood

burning deep inside of me

leave my heart sated tonight

 

break down every wall

mold me in your passion

tell me that you love me

and never let me go

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

30-60 Words
Prompt: Option #1

A contest entry

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  • moon2u
    September 14, 2008
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    I really like this one, so sensous and romantic
    good luck


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    Sweet

    And Deep Purple thought they ha dsmoke on the water. Your poetry has never let me down. You are spot on again sir. Keep up the great work. I'll be reading you again and again. Thank you for sharing your talent, Boog


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    this is a fantastic poem.. wow.. this poem is very sensual and full of love.. you did an excellent job with this. wOOt!!!!!

    good luck in the contest..

    kat


  • Asylaarix
    September 13, 2008

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    Good God!
    I am putty in your hands
    You know how to make a woman groan
    Jeesh baby!
    I'm melting to your words
    Playful baby!