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Love Understands

Failure is not a word that men like to admit to.
On a list, it’s ahead of not wanting to commit to.
Still there are those times about which we feel bad.
Instead of achieving launch, we fizzle on the pad.

Love is understanding especially in times like these.
She’ll take you in her arms and put you at your ease.
She’ll whisper reassurance as you sit with your head hung.
Then, with a sparkle in her eye she’ll ask:
                            “Is there anything wrong with your tongue?”



Author notes

I know they're beautiful pictures... I know you see them as sensual... But this one! I just couldn't let it pass... With apologies (but not sincere ones )
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: Missing You by Tanantbek Chekirov
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A contest entry

Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D

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  • Lucy.
    September 20, 2008

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    Oh dear dear ...and yet another silver! Well done.

  • beach28bunny
    September 18, 2008
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    beach28bunny

    Love is patient, love is kind.....until you got to the last two lines........it brought a smile and a little chuckle to my face. That is the way true love really is...love you now matter what. Maybe she didn't groan loud enough....Ha! Ha! Love goes both ways. I loved it.


  • JinSays gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    Fluffy...LOL, you're funny. this is too wonderful, and you are an awesome poet. Congratulations on the silver, excellent write,
    jin


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 17, 2008
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    Awesome LOL LOL LOL !
    Well man .. you sure have send my laughter to the roof top with this one..
    I can't stop laughing !
    stops................. take a breath Julie ......
    Wish I had read this one last I cant bloody type!
    Bookmarked
    Thanks fine poet for making my day
    Best wishes
    Julie

  • vacygnet
    September 15, 2008
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    I think the last line threw the rhythm off..it might work better as ...
    "cat got your tongue?"


  • hotchocolate gold member
    September 15, 2008
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    LOL!!!!! This is another greatone with good humor


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    this is definitely an interesting take on the prompt, I might add. only you could get away with this.. it was too good to pass up huh?? lol you're sense of humor shines through this write brightly...

    but you know you're right love understands no matter what..
    good luck in the contest my lover

    kat

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