Time to relax
time to enjoy
You come to me
and offer a playful kiss.
That sparkle in your eyes
tells me you’re in the mood
to misbehave…
I take you in my arms
and our kisses deepen
as I peel your blouse off…
Falling to the couch,
skin against skin,
our passion finds
its time…
Author notes
Option 1
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: Sex-4 @ www.photobucket.com
30 – 60 words (56 used 
)
A contest entry
- Adult Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
950 points, ended September 14, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D
Comments
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Okay...I'm going to get sick of congratulating you on your trophies soon.
I mustn't leave it so long between commenting next time...you're going crazy!
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Full of desire, softly sensuous, good emotion.
best wishes in the contest.
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Wow very sensual
that time is a wasting.. but you sure painted the image in beautiful thoughts.
Best wishes
Julie
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Beautiful and sensual!
Good luck to you in this contest
and thanks a lot for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826 -
our passion finds its time...
Love that ending their Ken, and well just ate up all the sensuality in this...Great writing
Hope you do well, my good friend
Cind's
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I love this poem that you wrote.. this is one very hot, erotic write.. I absolutely love this one.. the temp seems to have gone up in here a couple of notches.
Fantastic job on the prompt.
good luck in the contest
kat
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Oooooh
This one was playful
I liked this a lot
Beautifully sensual
Keep up the good work
Keep penning beauty
TT
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