Even though you hurt me
In the rudest, crudest way
All those feelings that I felt
Just won't go away
I realize you're no good
For me, or for my life
And though I know I have to
I still can't say goodbye
Author notes
Prompt 1: I couldn't miss you less if I tried
A contest entry
- I'm sick and bored...so I started a quickie by Blooming Poet.
950 points, ended September 13, 2008, 9 entries
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as the saying goes, your preaching to the choir!
this hits so close to home with my im still re-reading it and thinking, wow thats me.
I love this and I hope you continue
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It is amazing on so many levels I can relate to this poem. almost everything here Ii can relate to
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Sometimes love can really hurt and usually when it's most painful we indeed have a hard time really letting go.
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A nice take on the prompt... true feelings and emotions abound in your words... Well done and best of luck...
Ken
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