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Your Last Words

 

 

"Don't worry about me darling, I'll be home soon.

Before you know it, we'll both be making love!"

 

Those were your last words,

before you past away last summer.

I never knew it would be this hard.

Now I miss you more than anything,

and I am sorry that I let you go.

 

I miss you!

 

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10-50 Words
Prompt 1: I couldn't miss you less if I tried

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  • Blooming Poet
    September 13, 2008
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    the sadness here is so deep and almost seems to have a hint of personal in it.


  • Kari gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    Missing someone can be really hard. That last memory there would really want you to make them more that's for sure


  • KayJay
    September 13, 2008

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    Nicely done Jeremy... You've captured that feeling of emptiness that comes with lost love beautifully in your words... Well done and all the best...
    Ken


  • Asylaarix
    September 13, 2008

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    I loved it
    You took the prompt to a whole new level
    You really know how to make nothing turn into something
    I love you babe.
    beautifully penned!!

    TT


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    September 13, 2008
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    meant to give you claps

  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    September 13, 2008
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    Sad, but beautiful

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