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The Most Beautiful Kind of Truth

Amazing,
How the truth can set you free.
Isn't it amazing,
It's such a dangerous thing?

Truth can bring happiness,
And love,
Pain,
And broken hearts.

It can bring us back to the start,
To where the trouble began,
It can bring us forward,
To the very end.

But the most beautiful kind of truth,
Is the kind YOU can set free,
The kind,
Where I can tell him,
Without him laughing at me...

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    sweet

    I really liked your poem, and the meanings that you writen, are life lived especially this part.

    It can bring us back to the start,
    To where the trouble began,
    It can bring us forward,
    To the very end.

    well written,

    Rend


  • Dirty and Broken
    September 15, 2008

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    i don't like the second stanza, it doesn't flow as well as the rest of the poembut i absolutly love the ending
    thank you for entering, i really liked this


  • Sweet-Pea7
    September 15, 2008
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    hmm. and i wonder who this is about. jk. i know. it's a great poem.