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Mortal Love

The scent of her skin is overbearing
as I look at beautiful mortal next to me,
I tremble as I try to hold myself together,
before I lost control right there.

As time went on,
and this mortal took my love,
I never understood where this came from,
but I felt destiny paving the way through.

Her heart, her blood,
so pure and sweet-smelling,
her love so strong and unwavering,
Bella Swan, took my heart with no looking back.

My old soul, my non-beating heart,
in love with a mortal soul of gold,
there is nothing in this world, or the next
that can take the place of this bliss.

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  • DarkRomantic113
    September 17, 2008
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    Marvelous writing. You captured every emotion so well!


  • The Drifter
    September 13, 2008
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    I like--haunting --like I have been here before and not long ago.
    bw