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I Should Have Known



The first scene of events,
well it tingled to the bone,
it was only then I realized,
just how much I was alone.

She waltzed right in,
and took my breath away,
I thought my life had changed,
in a birth of a new day.

Time slipped by so quickly,
a chain of loving events,
in moments of all the passion,
our love was so intense.

But like the seasons change,
the mind can quickly too,
and before I could take a breath
I realized that I'd lost you.

It’s just the same old story,
one I must now own,
lost in the wrong place,
I should have known.





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  • Dirty and Broken
    September 15, 2008

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    i like this- it's the same song, sung to a different beat...if that makes any sense to you at all
    thank you for entering!

  • Amarige
    September 13, 2008
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    sad!


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    Bittersweet Candy...

    Sometimes the best (and hardest) lessons in life - live, love & learn. Good luck in the contest!!! Peace, Cyn


  • unavailable
    September 13, 2008

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    wow, you blow me away