The first scene of events,
well it tingled to the bone,
it was only then I realized,
just how much I was alone.
She waltzed right in,
and took my breath away,
I thought my life had changed,
in a birth of a new day.
Time slipped by so quickly,
a chain of loving events,
in moments of all the passion,
our love was so intense.
But like the seasons change,
the mind can quickly too,
and before I could take a breath
I realized that I'd lost you.
It’s just the same old story,
one I must now own,
lost in the wrong place,
I should have known.
Author notes
Option: I Should Have Known
A contest entry
- MUHAHAHAH!!!!!! by Dirty and Broken.
800 points, ended October 16, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i like this- it's the same song, sung to a different beat...if that makes any sense to you at all
thank you for entering! -
sad!


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Bittersweet Candy...
Sometimes the best (and hardest) lessons in life - live, love & learn.
Good luck in the contest!!!
Peace, Cyn


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wow, you blow me away





