I graced your glance
in heels and hips,
let you taste my insides,
and felt your kiss.
But there seems a coldness
on our fingertips
that nothing
will ever melt away.
Author notes
The blood of Scorpios a nine
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hm...i like it...reads it three times to get it, but i like it
the author's notes, on the other hand, just serve to confuse me- but don't worry, you won't get docked for that
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Thank you.
I always place a line from a song I've got stuck in my head in my author's notes.
That line is from the song "Midnight" by Red Hot Chili Peppers.
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