Emotional intensity,
rakes the ravaged mind,
sliding into dark turmoil,
subliminal and unkind.
Flow of life cut,
like a bud before flower,
by those so uncaring,
force upon you power.
Critical mind frame,
eclipses all the scenes,
trapped inside your own mind,
no one hears your screams.
Author notes
Thank you for the muse.
A contest entry
- Quickie ~ ~ Picture Prompt ~ ~ by blondone.
600 points, ended September 13, 2008, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Silver to Gold by Age of Rain.
360 points, ended September 27, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congratulations on the Silver Cup!!!
Your muse is working overtime, Karl!!!
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Grand this has strong emotions and clear imagery and you are so right no one can hear the screams thank you for entering
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Wow, this is such a great interpretation
of this picture! Wonderful work here
and all the best to you with it in this
contest!
Jeremy0826 -
This fits wonderfully with the photo prompt, great job Karl.
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