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The Dream

In a pool of light
Caressed by wildflowers
Violet, yellow, white

Bubbling stream
Butterfly sunshine
Soft grass, swaying flowers,
Warm, gilded air

White, diamond skin
Curled up, watching you
Lying there, eyes closed
Singing to yourself

You show your strength, your speed
Just trying to frighten me

Tracing the shapes of each other
With tentative, deliberate hands
Running at the speed of sound
Too dizzy to touch the ground

Slight hesitation. . .
And then you kiss me
You're driving me crazy

You are the most important thing to me now.
The most important thing to me ever.
You are exactly my brand of heroin.

Author notes

I love Twilight! Just wait until you read the rest! Some of the lines come directly from the book, and I give credit to Stephenie Meyer; I'm not trying to steal it, so please don't arrest me! haha

-Basically Chapter 13.

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  • Phoenix Shadow
    December 9, 2008

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    I tried to comment but I dunno where the comment went weird Great write anyways

    (heroin is BAD, stay away from that -_-)


  • Asylaarix
    September 13, 2008

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    I knew exactly what you were talking about the second I read it ... YES! I loved this ... it is amazing ... thank you so much for your entry! I am in love with this piece. God that chapter made me cry lol


    • SilverSea
      September 13, 2008
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      Wasn't it the most beautiful and romantic part? It's always been my favorite. But Edward's so beautiful and romantic, it's hard to choose

      • Asylaarix
        September 13, 2008
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        Yes he is the most beautiful character in the entire book I would have to say. But you are right, there are so many beautiful characters altogether. Have you seen the trailer for the movie yet?

        • SilverSea
          September 13, 2008
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          Yes, I have, two of them actually! Robert certainly wasn't what I expected, and I'm not sure he'll do too well, but we'll just have to wait and see. I can't wait until November! I'm so glad it got pushed forward. (Thank you, Harry Potter)

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