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If...

Everyone thinks about it,
If only this happened...
If so and so had only said this...
If I hadn't done that...

If is a word,
It is used to escape reality,
Sometimes it is a good thing,
Sometimes it is a bad thing,
Sometimes, it is neccicery,

Sometimes the word if
Is what gets you up in the morning
And through the day.

Everyday I think about the past,
A million If's go through my head,
Then I realize
All the things I say could happen IF only
Are only postponed by my past actions,
And to make them come true,
I can't focus on the if's,
I have to move on and continue my life.

Author notes

Well, I wasn't sure exactly what to do, I'm in a sort of mono-tone type of mood so my mind was sort of blank, but I tried, so I hope you like.

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  • Dirty and Broken
    September 15, 2008

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    i like it but the ending was kind of confusing, with the way it was written
    but whatever, thanks for entering