Radiant yellow ball glows happily
while smiling down warm rays;
sparkling reflections of mirrored images
float across blue-green waters.
Splashing as he submerges,
bobbing upside-down,
foraging below murky waters.
Glistening droplets spray as he surfaces;
small ripples gently expand
as the soothing sound of water flows.
Gliding across the sparkling surface;
waddling onto sandy shores,
he dries on a grassy mound.
Author notes
8. swan or goose or duck
art credit: The Swatch Collage by Jane Ware
A contest entry
- Collage by Cat.
3500 points, ended October 4, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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beautiful entry...
al -
some lovely images on this piece- i can really feel the movement of this piece
the droplets on his back, the sun
warming things- beautiful
thank you so much for the entry
m
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I think you did a great job on this one. Good luck to you
Hope you get many great comments
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what i love about this..is that i could interpret this as the sun rising and falling as well..second visit, second take on the poem
nice -
I like how you made the image come to life for me. Nicely done.
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I liked the middle section about the playfulness of them
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