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Comfort

Japan
Sitting in front
of a Shinto temple eating cold rice.

Not everything in life is warm

 

comfort

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  • B Chandler
    October 27, 2008
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    cricket


  • offlimits
    September 18, 2008

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    interesting way of veiwing it and weird i thought lol but hey thats just what i thought... i found it a bit confusing i had to red it twice before i understood.
    well done
    offlimits


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    Profound & visual...

    Love this...
    So much said in so few words...
    And the imagery presented in the mind of the reader makes for an enthralling write that lingers in the 'Comfort' of its essence...
    Another fantastic & compelling write...
    Well done!!!


  • Isabel Cult
    September 15, 2008

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    Ooh I love this. The structure is very interesting.

    I've always wanted to go to Japan...


  • righteousme
    September 15, 2008

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    WOW!!! this is a shorty but wow does it say a lot ...
    i love that you state "not everything in life is warm" and then "comfort" by itself ... it makes the two stand separate but as the reader, i know they are connected ... i do not know the inspiration for this piece, but it was obviously something good!!! great write!!!

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