Sensual nothings
spoken to
one another
through glancing eyes.
All the flirting from
you to me and me to you
with a wink of the eye
and a shy of the shoulder.
Passing by You
grazing the arms
of you and smelling
your delightful scent.
You finally speak
the words "Hey You"
I wanted to faint
to the floor those
words grabbed me and
wrapped around my aching heart.
Some how through time
you and i became intertwined
You speak to my soul
through some of the most vivid
of dreams you pull me
into you through your skin
How is all of this possible
when i have never met you?
When i all want to do is hold
you with in me, Feel you,
Touch you.
And what i fear the most
is you can't feel me this way.
Author notes
This is about
Someone i met but haven't met in person.
If that makes any sense?
A contest entry
- MUHAHAHAH!!!!!! by Dirty and Broken.
800 points, ended October 16, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What ya think? Let me know!
Comments
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it's a cute poem, definatly different than what i expected
thanks for entering!
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Hehe,
I know i took a turn in another direction from the horror " what i fear the most" lol
Well just glad you liked it .
-Mandi
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Let me guess.... this is about TROY?
Poems sounds like.....liiiiiike....one of them poems read in a movie in a womans kind of hushed voice and gentle... can you see what I am saying? those are the poems i really love. and this was one of em. wow from your first poem until this one...... its amazing. this poem.. its amazing. very proud of you big sis. very proud we havent talked in a while.. havent talked to Momma in quite a while either 
i hope shes okay.
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Sorry took me so long to comment back hun,
I am glad you liked it.
Lol, yes this poem is somewhat about Troy but then again it's not.. it's kind of hard to explain.
I haven't talked to momma in a while either. i hope she is doing great too.
I will return the favor very soon.
-Mandi
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Stanza 5, line 3.
You, not YOu.
This is.... interesting.
I don't know if I like it or not really. Some bits cling to me, others I just don't like how the word flow is going. It's rather cliche, might I add, and you explain the obvious to the extreme.
But overall the message in the end is good,
So I guess I do like it.
hahah,
Great write,
Mel
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Haha,
Didn't like it too well i see?
What message pulled ya in the most?
I knew this poem would confuse some people.
Thanks for commenting
-Mandi
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It was just a little to cliche for my taste.
It's a good poem overall, but I didn't really get like any 'emotion' out of it, you know? I mean, I bet you feel emotion when you read a really powerful piece, right?
Well. that didn't really happen for me. :[
lol.
Mel
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