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bug lust

digging deeper
growing redder
destroy the bugs
who make a fuss

wirey wasps
who so consume you
beetles black
who tongue with lust

free your body
clear your mind, now
everything is
turning hazy

don't let darkness
set on your eyes
quicker, quicker
don't get lazy

dig the needle
down in deeper
light the fire
inhale flame

in the morning
it'll all be better
shake with anger
hide your shame

tell me what you think. honestly.

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  • Glenn
    September 15, 2008
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    wow!

    Nice Poem buddy