I love you,
do you love me?
I need to know,
I'm going insane.
My heart is full of love for you,
I want to know if you feel the same.
I pray you do,
cause I'm dying for your love.
So I ask again,
do you love me?
How can it be better
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hehehehhee yayyyy *applaudes*
hehehe YAY amazing job! it has alot of feeling , it is short but it just makes the reader want more . i love it
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More questions eh? Sounds like your need to know things is never quite satisfied. I hope it never is, because I imagine it inspires great writes such as this, and many more to come. Well done.
Tal.
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Short and simple.
Beautifuly written
Well done!
♥
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awwww this is cute I love it
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No this is about a guy that everyone tells me he likes me but I'm not sure.
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this is a good write. simple, to the point, and hiding nothing. is this based on a dream of yours, as many of your poems about love seem to be?
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aW dIs iS kUtE!!iNo HoW iT fEeLs 2AsK dAt QuEsTiOn N wAiT 4aN aNsWEr!!I lUv It!!GrEat WrItE!!cHeCk Out mY pOeMs 2!!
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aww this is great, i like it. short simple sweet. i like it
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