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Emotional Trama

Screaming with pain-
my heart begins to break.
Your words are the knife-
they cut and slash at my heart as if it's nothing more than a cutting board.
Sick to my stomach by emotional trama,
I can only close my eyes and wish to disapier.
I've never felt this way.
Whats happening to me?
Will I die of a broken heart, or waist my life away in a mental instatution?
I hate how i love you so much.
Why can't my heart let you go?
All I want to do is forget about the times we've spent together,
all the nights we've staied up late,
with nothing but the t.v light,
laughing about nothing, as we held eachother close.
Tell me how it will end.
Now or never?

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  • upperworld06
    September 19, 2008

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    disapier should be dissapear...no that doesn't look right either...lol. good job, love is tuff. good luck.


  • jcat gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    At times we do feel that we shall perish of a broken heart when in fact we will only emerge stronger!! Wonderful job here and thank you for entering!