Halloween fangs in the moonlight,
So creepy and white,
They stick out,
But, the owner isn't bright.
The owner doesn't were white,
The owners pitch black,
As black as black can be,
She even turns into a bat.
This owner is a woman,
She has black hair,
With some Dark red highlights,
She even has a creepy stare.
Her eyes are red and silver,
Her heights about 5'5, 100 pounds.
She wears a black polo shirt and,
A red and black plaid skirt that surrounds.
Black boots, a sword and dagger,
Shes not one you want to mess with much,
No matter how old or young,
She has an evil clutch.
She's a Halloween nightmare,
Alive and in the flesh,
She has Halloween fangs,
And she likes them nice and fresh.
BLAH!!!!!!!!!
Author notes
Be careful of Halloween fangs!
This is about my vampire character Jade.
This is for Doggy Lovers contest-
DOUGHNUT DOODLES
Prompt:
Titles-
Halloween Fangs
The moment of truth
The wizard in blue
Captain crunch
For Little Feathers contest-
Rhyming
A contest entry
- Awesome Mystery prompt contest!!!!!!!(this contest is totally random)you've been warned:) by The Green Elf.
700 points, ended September 30, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 2008 Allpoetry Halloween Bash by Little Eagle.
12350 points, ended November 21, 2008, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very cool
Loved the imagery and flow.
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Thank you for your entry
lol, Cute, a little rough around the edges but has definite potential. A spelling error madder - matter.
The rhyme was a little off in places but good description. Good job with this.
Thank you for entering. Good luck in the contest and thank you for following the rules.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment
Happy Halloween and God Bless
Tammy
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ooooh! i like how you made the vampire into a real live person. like how you described them physically and made them seem creepier!
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Ooh, you wrote about a character of yours ; nice idea, and well done! [ponders] I wonder oculd I write about Basilica, my halfdragon, half Doberman fursona [ponders]
Anyway, nicely done! Best wishes in the contest
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i don't like the flow but other than that i think it was an AWESOME POEM!!! Keep writing!
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Wonderful!
I really enjoyed this emmy!
Though in line 5 you spelled "wight" wrong it should be white!
Not to be mean but I think it will help your poem flow better!
Goodluck!
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i'm going to lengthen the contest
your prompt:
Titles
Halloween Fangs
The moment of truth
The wizard in blue
Captain crunch
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