Don't we love to fight
And tear at each other!
Small sigh
And turned shoulders
Unfelt hugs
And meanigless niceties
Don't we love to make war!
We make love
And don't mean it
We hurt with
What we don't say
A littered, candied battlefield
Lies between our sheets
While we sleep heavily
And dream of nothing.
A contest entry
- 2 year anniversary! by bananasfoster42.
525 points, ended October 27, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-Writes Galore/no gold yet by piccola.
400 points, ended January 19, 100 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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comments that are rude are usually meaningless so don't give it a thought. I thought this was good. Usually I am a big time rhyme fan but I like this because of the meaning behind it. Another word about comments ... she doesn't always comment on entries; sometimes she just removes something she doesn't like so consider yourself praised in a way LOL
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verry interesting! (and as a side note i think the below comment is very rude. LOL!) thanks for the entry =)
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Just what in this made you think I would like it?
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