`
often, a small talk
alters an ambiance,
breezes a smile
both to known
and a stangers' face.
nowadays,
a keyboard speaks
[written conversations
technology pressed],
and brings smile
from a different form
unto our daily platter.
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A contest entry
- breathe by Namita.
800 points, ended October 16, 2008, 17 entries
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Very romntic and beautifull written. Great job.
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Somehow this made me think of internet conversations, of technology but you wrote it so beautifully and with a smile...
~ Nicolette


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