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They all Looked On

The whole world looked on
To that strange little thing
That no one quite understood
That strange little person
So different from all
Just had to be her
She couldn't be them

She learned how to be
But never quite passed the test
Of going through high school
Like everyone else did
She spent all her days
Stuck in her room
All by herself

She spent her time
All by herself
Slaving away at her arts
And now that they like
All that she does
This beautiful person
Who is on the screens

They all look on
In wonder and awe
Amazed that someone so plain
Can be so different
And now that she's there
Up on that stage
They all want to be with her

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  • JinSays gold member
    December 11, 2008
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    Thank you for this entry in my contest, and I wish you all the best,
    Love,
    jin


  • The Cube
    September 14, 2008
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    Good take on the picture. taking something abstract and bending it into more realism. Great work!