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Live no more

I thought I would live longer,
I know so much has happened in so little time.

For I did not even imagine,
I would die before my sweet sixteen.

Doctor says three months more,
live it to the fullest he tells me.

What do I do?
All I know to do is pray,
and ask for your prayers to help me get through this.

How can it be better

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  • JOaNnA eLiSe
    December 30, 2008
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    yay!

    its so sad buts its amazing! =)


  • SoldiersRain
    October 4, 2008

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    I sincerely hope this isn't written on reality. However if it is, I don't mean to pry, but my finance had leukemia and our prayers got her through it and now she's perfectly fine. Your definitely on the right track. Once again, great write.

    Tal.


  • Flowergirl
    September 28, 2008

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    that is so sad i would freak if i was told i only had a 3 months to live and it is terible to be so yung you havent even lived life yet it just is not fair...great write..

  • perfectdarkangel
    September 19, 2008

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    prayer is the best thing anybody can do. very emotional write, its very deep, I look forward to reading more. =]


  • mcrfan322
    September 14, 2008

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    hi

    hey great poem... its realy emotional... if you ever need someone to talk to id be more than happy to help...keep writing

  • dreamersalwayslive
    September 14, 2008
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    Aww, what a sad write. I hope your prayers help you through whatever it is your struggling with.


  • SilverWolf
    September 14, 2008
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    what do you mean
    whats gonna happen?
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