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Cold Silence of Neglect

Neglected children
Left all alone in cold silence
No bruises no love

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Option 7

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  • HereComesTheSun
    September 29, 2008
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    i love the last line it just sticks with you


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 26, 2008

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    The imagery created in this is quite startling!
    An excellent Haiku that says so much


    Thank You for your entry in Stop Child Abuse - September & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
    Co-Judge


  • maralisa silver member
    September 24, 2008

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    a wonderful haiku I think your poem is very deep thank you for entering the contest and good luck in the contest