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The Way Life Ends

A fading flash of bright nothing
The numbing feeling of losing yourself
The lostness of falling dark
The crushing yet pleasant silence, like rain
Knowing you're fading into every substance
Feeling a hand in yours, warm against cold
A rushing sound
and floating
water.




Act,
  on your impulse
  swallow the bottle
  cut a little deeper
  put the gun to your chest.

            ~Impulse

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  • midnitevampire22
    September 14, 2008
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    yeah, this one doesn't sound emo at all.