Enticingly beautiful, her body of perfect design,
As I gaze upon the lusciousness, that she reveals.
My body weakens in heartfelt emotions so fine.
My mind is distracted, as my love she steals.
Just a notice of her flowing hair, blinds me.
Just as a future touch, would tempt my soul.
Skin so soft and sensitive, she beguiles thee.
Her pose, so simple but divine, serves the goal.
To resurrect my senses, in true worship of her,
She brings out, sensuality of a Goddess supreme.
She is my ultimate fantasy, to this I concur.
She is within my heart and soul, as in a dream.
Author notes
Tamara option 4
A contest entry
- Adult only - Artist inspired contest by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
545 points, ended September 17, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I do love the way you have shown her in your own eyes..
how she has inspired you, and your emotions flow..
Thank you for your entry and best wishes
Julie
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Beautiful. Is that a drawing of Pan in your avatar?
Anyway sorry, I loved this, I think there is so much adoration and affection here, you've really got a grasp on who she is. This poem of yours is beautiful, the goddess thing...wow! What woman wouldn't love that?
Excellent,
best wishes,
jin
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I think I know this woman!! Another good write for you. I like the last stanza especially...keep up the good work
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Thank you sweetie
If you know this woman then you are definitely so very lucky, I have met a few that come close but not completely yet,, any way darling thanks for the words,,and blessings of light,life,laughter and love..Firestorm
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