Bodies pressed in loves tender swell
silk desires slowly slip
baring blushed satin skin
breaths in sensual melodies gasp
erotic whispers play minds game
soft loving lips touch
sultry curves in fingers feathery tips trace
caressing bejeweled pleasured flesh
naked innocence murmurs
laced in passions fiery embrace
hypnotic breathless pulses beat
ecstasy's first tender rush
Author notes
Option #2
A contest entry
- Adult only - Artist inspired contest by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
545 points, ended September 17, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You have some wonderful language here: silk desires slowly slip - that is masterful. A real feeling for sound - you use the labials and silibants especially well. There is a magical quality to this poem!
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Thank you for your lovely comment Bruce
A pleasure to have you stop by
~sugar~
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Stunningly-Beautiful
Absolutely beautiful this piece is. Wonderful writing and this piece really shows such depths to it to. It is layered with a blanket of deep love and respect. Stunning work again Sugar.
Darkest love to you
Wayne Leon
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You read this well sweetie..I was feeling inspired.
Again thank you for reading and leaving a lovely comment.
Valued and appreciated
Darkest love always
Chelle xxx
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Beautiful
Just beautiful, sis. You've really grown as a romantic poet. Good one.
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Thank you bro for your lovely comment
I always appreciate you reading
~sugar~
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Heat of flames in colour .. paints the image so beautifully.
Sensually desiring
Thank you for your entry and best wishes
Julie
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Thank you hon, for the HM and your fab comment
truly appreciated
~sugar~
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Your flow is better!
Very good alliteration and imagery that dances erotic images in the mind of the reader. I see growth even in this area, which I have always considered for you as your strongest.
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Thank you sweetie
Tis a pleasure as always to read your comment.
valued and appreciate
Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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wowza dis is hot
i need to take a chill pill and cleanse my you no what!
gd luck 2 ya
abe
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Cheers glad you enjoyed
Appreciate you reading
~sugar~
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