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Lost But Not Forgotten



A mother's child
unknown on earth
greeted by God
now singing with mirth.








©2008
9-13-08

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Written for the contest: Contest 13 Words Only for this Picture X by PhantomsAngel87
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2420817

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  • Elvenfairy
    September 26, 2008

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    I've always wondered what happened to babys who are born dead. Or msicarrages. I mean when it wasn't caused by a car accident of falling down the stairs or abortion. Is it God changing his mind about them being born? Anyways, this is a powerful poem for so few words.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 20, 2008

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    Gosh. I am rendered speechless for this is personal for my heart

    ♥
    Thank You & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda