You have torn my heart to pieces as if it were nothing but paper
Do you not realise, how could you not when you have told me so often you felt it before?
Feeling as I do I can not understand how you would want or have the ability to make another human being feel this.
A human whom did nothing but show love and friendship, a guide to you a kinda of protector.
Was all for laughs or simple form of friend abuse?
My heart hurts and bleeds! Is all this unnoticed? Whom do I cry to now? One of who I thought to stands to be the one who has caused the break!
The sorrow swells in me like an ocean wave ready to sallow and destroy the life to which I lead.
The pain to which I feel can understand the suside's want. Why prolong the living hell? Can the other be so much worse?
Am i blowing this out of perportations or are my assumptions correct? Can I truly handle the truth? Will my heart stand that obliteration?
I stand to hold my heart in an icy cage and no longer feel this pain. Forever I, never again we for once is enough for this pain.
If I make it through... I, I will be forever!!!
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The pain to which I feel can understand the suside's want. Why prolong the living hell can the other be so much worse?
suiside --> suicide.
there are other spelling and grammar errors but the raw emotion makes up for it.
great write, hun. -
wow, this was so moving.
the ending was my favorite:
"Am i blowing this our of perportations or are my assumptions correct? Can i truly handle he truth will my heart stand that obliteration?
I stand to hold my heart in an Icy cage to no longer feel this pain. Forever I never again we for once is enough for this pain.
If I make it through... I, I will be forever!!!"
bravo!
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