It is enough, my love.
For what you give me
is you...
All of you.
I feel your pain
when you leave my side.
Yes, I know where you go
I know you don't want to
but can't seem to stop yourself.
I know it's an addiction
yet addictions can be cured.
All we need do
is be together.
Together we can defeat everything
that your addiction makes you do.
I love you!
Love can heal
love can cure
love is enough!
What you give to those others
this is not love.
Sex is not love.
Sex is sex.
Nothing more
nothing less.
Oh it can make love
so enjoyable.
But even if you never
touched me again
I would still love you.
Because you touch my heart,
my soul,
my inner most self.
And I...
I know I touch you too.
Addiction or no
I love you
and I'll wait
til you come back to me.
Cuz you are enough.
Author notes
I used your poem I'M SORRY (BUT ITS NOT ENOUGH). I hope that this was a good try anyway. Hope you like it.
Ap name is trekkergirl. I would like to be a sister if possible. And my favorite color is blue. Thanks for asking.
In a list
- honorable mentions trophies • next in list
- My poems • next in list
- trophy winners of mine • next in list
- trekkergirls poetry corner group list • next in list
A contest entry
- Brothers and Sisters... AP Family one and All by Poetryistherapy.
770 points, ended September 25, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - rawr I want good love poetry!!!! by Live with a passion.
600 points, ended November 15, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Trekker, this is the first on your list and one I had not read. It's a longs way back here but gathering dust in the background is not something I will let poems do. This was a most beautiful piece that was so full of emotion and so much love. You created a wonderful feeling of cntentment and even allowed us to see the frustration coming from the other person. Very well thought out and shared with us all. An honourable win for this wasn't a bad start for your marvelous beginning here. Congrats on that. You have bloomed and come a long way and touched a lot of people with your writes. Keep up the great work.
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thanks for the wonderful comment dear condor... I love your comments. They make me feel soooo good when I read them.
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This is well written and should be a gold winner, such emotion and feelings flow through the words, a poem that touchs all who read it, John -
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Thanks for your comment on my poem Enough. Another emotional poem. Seems lately that's all I am writing.
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This was written with such fervour and positivity on such a tragic circumstance.
An excellent piece.
All the best with it
gaylene
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Thanks for your comment on my poem. I guess I must be in an emotional mood this last few days... cuz it seems that all i am writing about.
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Thank you trekkergirl, I look forward to your second entry....
This poem was fantastic, and I am grateful that you have entered my contest!! -
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The second one is already in the contest. I hope you enjoy it too.
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