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I Miss You

 

 

 

 

My heart aches endlessly each day,

like a mother missing her lost child.

Your powerful arms that you used to embrace me,

like a warm blanket around my entire heart.

 

The look of love in your big blue eyes,

like a diamond you shined your way into my life.

Your memorable and handsome face,

still burns in the corner of my mind.

 

I can still feel your tenderness upon my neck,

and the passion that you instilled within my heart.

There is so much love left for me to give you,

if only you knew and could feel all that I do.

 

The nights are so much colder now,

bringing nothing but loneliness and tears.

My heart tumbles and falls continuously,

like an endless avalanche of emotions.

 

I miss you so much my love,

and all of the times we used to share.

Please tell me that you'll come back home to me,

and help me mend this broken heart of mine.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Option #2
Tender Passion

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    Lost love penned beautifully
    Deep emotions flow with pain and sadness
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes
    Julie


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    Your killing me

    This was penned with great emotion and I felt through my bones. The memories of LOVE lost not cheap lust but true LOVE never leaves your heart. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece, Best of luck to you my friend, Boog


    • Jeremy0826 silver member
      September 17, 2008
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      Thanks a lot for reading bro!
      I appreciate your thoughts and applause
      on this write. I hope that you are well!
      Take care and have a great one.



      Jeremy0826


  • JinSays gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    Ahh, this is very sad. I think you did a wonderful interpretation here, softly yearning.
    Beautiful,
    jin


  • moon2u
    September 14, 2008

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    Aw, this one is sentimental and everyone has that special someone, for whom their feelings just won't
    quit
    good luck


  • Camille Morin gold member
    September 13, 2008
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    Jeremy, this is exquisite and heartbreaking. I wish you peace.
    Sincerely,
    Camille Morin


  • Im Forever Yours
    September 13, 2008

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    Such a wonderful write. I can relate in so many ways, you can feel the love and sadness in this poem. Keep up the great work.


  • sweetgurl
    September 13, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Very well written...I can relate. Thank you for sharing.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    wow J..

    Very touching my man. Greatly expressed here..it is my sincere wish youbaren't actually going through this though. excellent pen.

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