Orbs of oceanic blue
Heart more pure than gold
I'm honored, no, estatic
I'm Priveleged to say
You
Are
Mine
Author notes
I don't even live in the same state anymore but the need for him is undying.
A contest entry
- Romance (20 words) by misticmoonlite.
300 points, ended September 13, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Rawr.
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please disregard what i wrote in this poem...he doesnt belong to me anymore...it was his choice.
he broke my heart, ripped it up completely, and yet my need for him is undying -
aww this is really sweet. its short but so full of emotion!
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Well done:)
I really like this one
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nice i like it it is sooo sweet
cute
lovely
adorable
just love it
welldone
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Well done on this piece
thanks for sharing.
beautiful in content
best wishes
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lovely entry,
thank you for sharing your love for that special one with us, thank you for this entry...good luck
Linda
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