The mist veils,
But still the clouds open her eyes,
She knows the mountain is still there waiting for her.
Author notes
We fight. We have had indifferences. Then we might not talk. But then i know that my eyes would be searching for him. Just to know whther he is looking at me. The ego strike continues. But then when he smiles at me. I run towards him with tear-dwelled eyes. A hug and a kiss, and then i know he would be there for me always!
A contest entry
- Romance (20 words) by misticmoonlite.
300 points, ended September 13, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i like it i really did
well done hun -
the poem spoke for itself
indeed a powerful read and so
true my freind
great job here
passions
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very pretty
what a lovely poem for your love, I feel we all have our moments, but work at it and be there, helps even more...thank you for this entry, good luck
Linda
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