Come dance among the star dust,
our twilight tango for two.
In between steps, sweet kisses,
make all our dreams come true.
Radiance of the super nova,
could never compare to you.
For you are my shining star,
you make me feel brand new.
Shooting star drifts to earth,
shining down upon our love.
Showers of hope and splendor,
raining from Heaven above.
Magical force loom in galaxy,
combined with love's creation.
Come dance among the stars,
create sparkling titillation.
Costellations spin and twirl,
taking our breath away.
Cherish moments in your arms,
as we embrace a new day.
Author notes
Option... Shall We Dance
In a list
A contest entry
- Options for your muse. by Topaze.
900 points, ended September 26, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Whoooweee - romance out the waaazzzooo!
Very nicely penned here, Sandy
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Thank You
Hello Wade. Always nice when you drop by. Good to see you out and about again.
Glad you liked the poem. It was a fun one to write. 
You take care. Blessings to you my friend.
Sandy
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I really enjoyed this write, so full of images of dancing and the stars.
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Thank you for reading and commenting. You take care. Sandy
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OOh, I really like this, especially the title, because it totally caught my eye X
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Thank you for reading and leaving a nice coment. Take care. Sandy
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Wonderful job..so full of imagery. the stars must have been shining in their eyes as they danced and passed the love between them.
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Hello June!!!!!
It is always nice when you drop by. Thank you for reading and this lovely comment. I hope you and your family are well. Blessings to all of you.
Sandy
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Wow, how very unusual a comparrison made. Great ideas/pictures painted - absolutely loved it!
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Very Nice Comment
I appreciate you stopping by and reading. Always nice to hear from you. Take care.
Sandy
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A very lovely piece that flowed weightless in space, thank you for your fine entry in this contest. My best wishes always.
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Nice Comment
Thank you for the nice comment. Just getting some of my emotions out before they build up too much.. You take care.
Sandy
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Excellent take on the prompt shall we dance. The reader is taken for the journey to step on the floor to dance the night away. Love shared in embraces held tight and twist side to side. The reader is left with the music and stars.
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Great Comment!!
Good morning Dan. So glad you enjoyed the dance. So much fun mid the stars and music till daybreak. Oh those dreams, they can take us anywhere we want to go. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Always so nice to read your thoughts. Hope you have a wonderful day. You take care.
Blessings To You,
Sandy
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So beautifully written
Sigh....
I love love poems and this is a beauty of a piece
Wishing you love beyond measure,
Sandy -
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Lovely Comment
Good morning Sandy. So nice to have you stop by. Hope all is well. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Oh .My ! How magical
The way you did dance on.
With the lights of heaven.
To your own little song..
The magic of the splender
As you danced the night away...mac
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Thank you Mac. Love to dance the night away. I dance right into my dreams each night till the early morning light. Always so nice to read your sweet comment. Hugs and Smiles.
Bless You,
Sandy
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!
And off to the heavens we go! I cannot dream of a more beautiful place to be.
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Good morning Kevin. Thank you for this lovely comment. It brought a smile this morning. It is always wonderful to dance in the Heavens. See you there among the stars my friend.
Blessings,
Sandy
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