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The Unseen

Alongside man
they walk the earth,
spiritual beings,
elemental entities,
living their lives,
spirit and flesh,
all one.

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  • Life is a Beach gold member
    September 13, 2008
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    Yes! True indeed! I believe that everything and everyone are/is interconnected! Pam


    • FreeSpirit53
      September 13, 2008
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      Hi again Pam,
      I seem to like producing these very short ... can't call them poems.... Would you say that's a bad thing? Should I force myself to try longer pieces? (Check out storywrite.com... I've started a chick-lit/dark novel. :0) See what you think.
      Hope you're having a good weekend.
      Shirley