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Wilted Roses


Wilted roses on the bedroom floor
Love me all night again
I caress your face
Whisper, "you're mine"
"I know"

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20 words

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 13, 2008
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    simply beautiful
    well penned in 20 words
    great emotion and power of love

    well done


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    another

    romantic piece, the heart is yours to share with your love, thank you for this entry....good luck
    Linda