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Romance

Romance  like dance
moves earth and heaven in streams
waves high in weaves
and reflects the sweet moon of love
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  • offlimits
    September 15, 2008
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    sweet
    loved it
    outspoken
    well done


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 13, 2008
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    Well done on this piece
    thanks for sharing.

    beautiful in content


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 13, 2008
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    verrry nice piece to entry in this contest, thank you and good luck
    Linda