His ocean blue eyes look up me
They fly you away to a distant place
His hand so tiny and soft
His feet so big like his dad's of course
His lips so soft and small
I wish I could kiss them
His cheeks so soft and rosy
His hair as dark as the midnight sky
He's as cheeky as they come
But I still love
Like a Mum.
A contest entry
- Maternity by SeaWithYourHeart.
700 points, ended November 18, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This poem is so full of love for your little boy. How old is he now? Oh, by the way, I live in east Tennessee. USA.
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Very touching and most poignant, indeed! A fine and most heart felt poem, that could only be written by a mom (in USA it's "mom") bravo!
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Awww. This is so beautiful. I mean it. Lovely! The imagery is just perfect! I can just picture him! He must be adorable. Such an angel huh? Hehe. Great work!
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Aww I didn't get a chance to see him at work the other day. but he looks heaps adorable from all the photos. And regardless of what people say I reckon you're a great mum =)
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awww this is beautiful thankyou for your poem
its perfect thankyou -
Adorable and Sweet
Your son sounds beautiful and sweet.I really liked the poem.
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this is so sweet
awesome job ! <3
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Awww! That is one of the sweetest poems i have seen lol ^.^ Great job!
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