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The September moon
sways

as I stand
softly
beneath your sky

touching a world
that longs to be
beside you...

A contest entry

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  • offlimits
    September 15, 2008
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    now this is a beautiful poem it is so breath taking im breathless
    loved it
    welldone


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    now this is simply beautiful
    alot of great entries in this
    \contest but this has a sweet romantic
    feel to it
    great job


    passions


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    lovely

    when one tests natures beauty,it is found to be truly beautiful, thank you for this entry, good luck...
    Linda


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    What a wonderful 20 words, this expression of love surpasses all others I have read. Simple but effective. Best to you in the contest