I thought you cared
I was there for you when u needed me
but where were you when I needed you???
I`m not sorry that this ended44
but I am sorry that I ever knew you!
you caused me so much hurt!
what did you get???
nothing!
"I was crying, hurting,
You were out with your mates laughing and joking about it."
I truly LOVED you!!
Now I HATE you!
I don't EVER want to see you again!!
I`m not going to miss you.
Goodbye!
Author notes
**Heartbroken-Headcase**
A contest entry
- First contest,Four options, i'll love you forever if you enter? by Jaffa-.
560 points, ended November 11, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tel me wat u think!!!
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its good but it seemed more like a story than a poem
but overall good
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This contains a lot of emotion. but it didn't really speak to me you know. The emotion just stayed there and wasn't aloud to flow freely. I did enjoy it but i beleave that it needs a bit more description to make the emotion more freely expressed.
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thanks!
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OMG i love this welldone yay it better then i can make lol ^^
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thanks!!!!!!
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...*insert very loud squeal* ITS SO GOOD! OMG! 
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thanks!!!!
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