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Forgotten

Forever forgotten,
Forever lone,
Always under a stone,
Buried as adult 172.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 20, 2008

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    Deeply sad; Use of words forever forgotten, alone creates strong imagery and emotions

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    Thank You & Best of Luck
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    ~Manda


  • trekkergirl
    September 19, 2008
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    wow so sad


  • kel dog
    September 13, 2008
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    like this. with few lines make greatr poem.

  • saretyuiop
    September 13, 2008
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    Wow, great depth expressed within only a few lines...