One day I am walking
this earth
the next
I lie 4 feet under.
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A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture X by Manda Kathryn.
300 points, ended September 20, 2008, 47 entries
Honorable mention
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Yeah...I agree, four feet under means the diggers were not being paid or the mortician didn't give a hoot! Excellent and quite sad!
Congrats on earning the Emerald Cup!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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I just had to laugh at this comment. Made my day. Wasn't thinking that way at all. But shhhh... you made me laugh
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I rather like how you've said 4 feet under instead of the usual 6; for me that gives the sense of a quick burial by uncaring schmucks ... Excellent
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Thank You & Best of Luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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I just wasn't thinking that way at all but you really did make me laugh. I mean really.. I wasn't thinking about 6 feet under... guess that'd be right tho.
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Fantastic
A lot said in just 13 words, I hope this wins because it is great, John
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thank you!
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