mingled as air
unlike carved to fit
emotions lighter
flying for other world
time without measure
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aeons pass like moment.
A contest entry
- Romance (20 words) by misticmoonlite.
300 points, ended September 13, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wonderfully penned herre
was a delight to read.
best said in 20 words
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a wonderfully beautifull take on the promt I loved the last line your poem says so many things dad good luck in the contest
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thank you sweet child
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oh my so well put, thank you for sharing andentering this contest....good luck
Linda
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thank you!
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