Family, a strange word to say
Meaning nothing more than love
Unconditional, will never sway
Even in the darkest cove...
Wanting to come home, but can't
Or for some, just won't.
I'll take you on my little rant
And then you cast your vote...
Mother, darling, dearest friend
So many tales to tell you
Knowing it was not the end
And hoping you would know it, too...
I missed you dearly, mom
Truly, it was awful.
But time ticked by, like a bomb
It all seemed so unlawful...
I shall now return to you
(Hoping to be accepted)
Mommy dearest, love me! Do!
Don't make me feel rejected...
Meaning nothing more than love
Unconditional, will never sway
Even in the darkest cove...
Wanting to come home, but can't
Or for some, just won't.
I'll take you on my little rant
And then you cast your vote...
Mother, darling, dearest friend
So many tales to tell you
Knowing it was not the end
And hoping you would know it, too...
I missed you dearly, mom
Truly, it was awful.
But time ticked by, like a bomb
It all seemed so unlawful...
I shall now return to you
(Hoping to be accepted)
Mommy dearest, love me! Do!
Don't make me feel rejected...
Author notes
I missed AP so much, and couldn't wait to get back. It's been such a long time since I've been able to write anything, though. And it's time to rebuild my darling AP family!
I'd like to be some kind of daughter or god-daughter. Don't care... love you anyway!
Much love, as always,
Bubbles
A contest entry
- Looking For AP Family/ Rounds Contest by mysticstorm.
600 points, ended October 10, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nicely written. Today I am working in my brother's shop (better than my other job, by far - at least it's dry and cold here, not soaked and frozen). I'm sure there was more of a point to make than this. Hm.


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Beautifully put! Good luck


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yo lady...how's it going...how's the baby...and yeah well how's life...
this is a great piece...and hey you obviously came back with bang...considering this is really heartfelt and all...nice job!
~Lee-Ann

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this is very touching...tender as much heartfelt too...who could reject you after this wonderful spill of your heart...certainly not I!


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I love you and have missed you so much...I will always be your mother and always be here for you as long as you want me...yes it has been too long and you were missed dearly...beautiful write of family and love needed...I hope the last year has been good to you and you are still following your dreams...
Love always,
mom -
lovely heartfelt write expressing the deep need for the love and acceptance of family.

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