Free forming words
Poised on her crimson lips
So pure she might seem
But only before
A twisted smile emits
Bringing up her knees
Arms wrapped tightly
She looks into the eyes
Of the one who took his life
She spits in his face
Smug
She wasn't gonna be
Danglin' on a string any longer
Curling a strand of hair
Around her fingers
She watches
A signature glare
In her eyes
Dark
And cold
He twitches
Moans
Convulses
And all she does is watch
His suffering is music
To her ears
All he did was betray
Anyway
Drawing slowly
The dagger from her back
She looks thoughtful
Peaceful
With her eyes
That wicked ominiescent black
And she plunges
The dagger
Deep into his chest
Only to leave the words
Carved deep
"Only I loved you best"
Author notes
::shrugs:: Another dark write, but what can you expect from me? It's who I am if you look at my past poetry. I really enjoyed writing this though, because of the challenge!! It is about as someone brought to my attention: Killing him slowly and painfully as he did to her on the inside. The line "Of the one who took his life" is the only him...taking his own to try to outrun her. It's a revenge thing. I guess, if you read the Twilight Saga, you'd understand. I believe it is in New Moon when Rosalie tells her story.
ENJOY!
SatuRn
A contest entry
- Because You Want To Be Challenged, Right? by HagarenHanyou.
900 points, ended October 16, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - the DARKWRITE challenge rides again by Ktulu Blackwolfe.
600 points, ended December 20, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Neatly penned, some strong emotions within your words. Thank you for entering and good luck
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Wonderful write. I love this and I like the little twist at the end.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe** -
A very interesting write here. The last line confuses me a bit, because I thought that the guy killed the guy she loved, and then how could she love him if he killed?
Great imagery, and I love the darkness of it. I wish you luck too!
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