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Wanting to be loved

1) I think this is ok for option one..
I will change it if you think its not

I wish
I want to be the girl you look at and say that's her
The one you can't take your eyes off because I'm all you see
I want you to call me goodnight just so I feel secure
The one you will listen to for hours just  because its me.

I'm not lonely but I miss the feeling of being loved.
Being able to look at someone always ready with a smile.
I want to be the girl you are always thinking of.
Being someone you wait to walk down the hall because I'm worthwhile.


I want your arms around me , holding tight , never letting go
Brushing hair back from my face even though your friends are standing there.
I want you to kiss me, not caring  whether teachers know.
Even ditching crowds to be alone just  because you don't want to share.

When I walk across the room, I wish I was the girl your eyes never left.
I wish you leaned over too close to explain something all the time.
When you talk about me to your friends I want to be the one you can't forget.
I want to be the one you fight for because I have to be in your life.





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  • the ripple
    October 29, 2008
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    Very good poem...really honest and 'OUT THERE,' y'know.


  • joleahe
    September 28, 2008
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    follow the rules or you will be disqualified


  • HeartBr8ker
    September 13, 2008

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    awesome

    This is awesome. Yes it works... Bella is french... I knew that one thanx though. These are all girl names... And I love your Poem